Today is an exciting day. Izzy, a student just like you, is going to help me teach my writing lesson today. Now Izzy and I haven’t met, but she can still be our writing teacher!
Look at the video and the photos below to see how Izzy revised her ending.
I tried to revise my ending too.
Please share your writing on our Padlet board so we can learn from you too – https://padlet.com/tbmulligan/xtj7jk1467zg